a nymph slips
sylph shaded
I gaze into
sentient essence
sarcophagi
quietude
beckons
lunar one
come find me
among lithium
my Lilith orb
I have become
a Lily white atom
fluttering
soaring
floating
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Mourgana of the Fey (
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Comments4
The use of variegated alliteration in this poem pulls the reader along. Unexpected associations dot the landscape and paint a Salvador Dahil like painting. Nicely done
Thank you Soren!
This is a powerful poem. I enjoyed the images created.I had to look up some of the big words however.Well done
Thank you David much appreciated!
I have enjoyed the read but for me this is a bit of a mind tingle, nicely written
Thank you Poetic Licence!
You are very welcome
Wonderful, my friend. Love the imagery and the way the poem feels almost chant like. Wonderful job, R. 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan! Yes this can be a chant, its one of the variations on this theme that I have written, I hereby promise I will not post all the 100 variations....just kidding....glad you enjoyed this piece!
LOL! Please do! 🤣 I am really enjoying your work. You are most welcome!
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