The feeling of the unknown makes you tick,
You’re tumbling down an alley way making you sick .
The time passes incredibly quick,
Is it my mind or is it a trick?
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Author:
Nicole Sarah Robinson (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A short basic poem that runs through my mind on a daily basis!
- Category: Short story
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Comments2
The use of an AAAA rhyme scheme in this poem makes it seem obsessive compulsive and leaves the mind searching for more potential future rhymes. Very nicely said.
That is a clever and enjoyable piece of writing, sometimes it's both, a trick played on mind
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