Jump
Drown
Take all my pills
Cut my wrist
Pull the trigger
End the threat
Take care of the problem
The doctors
My family
My friends
Left
But
Will come back after it's done
And
The time is today
Jump
Drown
Take all my pills
Cut my wrist
Pull the trigger
End the threat
Take care of the problem
The doctors
My family
My friends
Left
But
Will come back after it's done
And
The time is today
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Comments2
A dark view of problem solving that many have considered and some have taken. A last line solution. In short lines fragments of thoughts are expressed. This tends to add tot the agitation and despair in the work. Nicely penned
The extreme end of dealing with some problems although to the person encountering those problems it will appear the easiest, nicely written and expressed
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