sunshine happiness

jim56

when the sun is shining it makes a change in you
makes you want to smile as it comes shining through
brings a little happiness sending down its ray
makes the world feel brighter on such a lovely day

sitting in the garden with a barbecue
with friends and family and a drink or two
soaking up the sun in the sky so blue
bringing happiness as it comes shining through

  • Author: jim56 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 11th, 2025 04:41
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sorenbarrett

    Such a lovely poem Jim full of sunshine and brightness to lift a rainy day spirit

    • jim56

      hi thanks for always lovely comment

    • Tony36

      Excellent write Jim

      • jim56

        thankyou for comment

        • jim56

          thanks for comment

          • Tony36

            You're welcome

          • teardrop

            Hi Jim, thanks for the smile. This piece and a lot of imagery (at least for me) I could actually see the sunny blue sly and smell the bar b q. Loved it. Hope all is well with you...Rene'

            • jim56

              hi rene nice to hear from you
              hope you well and ok
              thanks for such a lovely comment]
              made my day jim



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