Shaking feeling

Maplespal

Shaking feeling


I am having again that feeling.
I am seeing again that vision.
I am losing you from my view.

I am shaking again with clattering.
I am scared again of a future alone.
I am losing you from my view.

Reliving that day it hurts so hard,
replaying that losing hand of cards.
Watching as you pass away,
losing you from my view that day.

I am having again shaking feelings,
and a too prolific sight in view.
Time will start the slow healing,
lesson the clatter when thinking of you.

For now I think and feel it hard,
staring at that last hand of cards.

 

 

 

  • Author: Maplespal (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 11th, 2025 05:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Some times we cannot stop the pain and have to let it play out.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
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  • Libellule

    Nicely done... the repetition works so well with this

  • MDStone

    I’m so sorry for the pain you feel. But I agree that we cannot avoid it. I only hope that in your pain are the good memories like old movies. Where we can sit and both cry and laugh at the same time. An excellent write. I’d say you played your hand well! Thanks for sharing.

    • Maplespal

      So picture this: A cowboy loses his woman to another man because for the bet, he used her as the bet. Then the winner shoots, killing her.

    • sorenbarrett

      A traumatic loss is most difficult to overcome and putting the feelings on paper is sometimes the best way. Wishing you a mending day. Thank you for sharing.

    • Tony36

      Great write



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