Lost in the Mud

Thomas W Case

Dirty and broken
dreams fall like
slanted rain in
a hurricane.
Mud-faced youth
plummet to the
ground.

Author: Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
Published: April 11th, 2025 17:24
Comment from author about the poem: On my YouTube channel, I read from my recently published books, Seedy Town Blues Collected Poems, and It's Just a Hop, Skip, and Jump to the Madhouse. Both are available on Amazon.com www.thomaswcase.com my website.
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Views: 25
Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange, Poetic Licence

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sorenbarrett April 11th, 2025 18:15
Disheartened and dark this poetically describes the end of many dreams. Well done
- Thomas W CaseApril 13th, 2025 09:56
  Thank you.
arqios April 11th, 2025 20:05
Brilliant work🙏🏻🕊️
- Thomas W CaseApril 13th, 2025 09:56
  Thanks.
- arqiosApril 13th, 2025 14:17
  Welcome
Tristan Robert Lange April 11th, 2025 20:11
This is brilliant, Thomas. A fave! Wonderful poem! 🌹👏
- Thomas W CaseApril 13th, 2025 09:56
  Thank you.
- Tristan Robert LangeApril 13th, 2025 13:38
  You are most welcome, my friend!
dimpy April 12th, 2025 01:11
great writing...
- Thomas W CaseApril 13th, 2025 09:57
  I appreciate it.
Poetic Licence April 12th, 2025 01:45
End of dreams, brilliant writing, enjoyed
- Thomas W CaseApril 13th, 2025 09:57
  Thank you.
- Poetic LicenceApril 13th, 2025 10:03
  You are very welcome

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