Listening to my three feathered sisters
magpies muttering as faint flakes
swell
cosmogenic cosmonauts
it is not history that haunts us
when roaring blades
fall into mourning air
it is said trees are our historians
life saviours
we have to accept it
because we lived
each cremation
our beloved has fallen
because we survived
once he was the apple
of mine eyes
I ask you now
return as this page
read into me
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Mourgana of the Fey (
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A well written piece. I felt at one with nature. I see the circle of life and the connections to it that come back around to us. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you MD Im happy to read that some of this poem has resonated with you, Nature is my soul guide and compass!
The vary wording and metaphors in this write make it most intriguing and as one reads on it has more and more hooks that take one to a faintly remembered place of origin. Lovely
Hello Soren, yes this poem has various angles, I have mixed a few lines. I find if I do this the poem gets a total new perspective. To remember or remember the place where one comes from yes thats surely a theme in my writing! Have a lovely day!
We really do destroy nature, do we not? And, we destroy our own nature and identity in doing so. A most beautiful poem that speaks in equal measure beauty and urgency. Well done! 🌹👏
Hello Tristan,
Sadly yes, we do this, there is a song by Coil that goes man is the animal, I totally vouch that line! I do like to think that perhaps there is a way that nature can be helped. There is hope. Glad you enjoyed this piece! Enjoy your day!
Indeed. I hope for and believe in that too, Mourgana. I just hope more and more find themselves in agreement and joining the search for the solution(s). Thank you. You too!
Trees are amazing.Well highlighted in this powerful work.It made me think.Well done
Hello David, yes and yes! I think trees are amazing. I realise that I am a very lucky person because I can see hundreds of trees each day. They still live here and during early walks it smells so fresh. Anyways have a good day!
Great write
Thank you Tony, good to know you enjoyed the read!
You're welcome
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