I had a secret to share with youHow you would smileAnd sayYou sillyBut you are notThe cold death took over youAnd I talk to the wall.
This aches
It does.
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
Thank you a lot.
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
Thank you dear. Love and hugs.
You are very welcome
touching, a great write
Thank you.
most welcome
It's hard to loose someone. Hopefully the wall doesn't talk back. Lol
Yes it is hard to loose someone.
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This aches
It does.
Tragic and sad. Well written in few words making it more powerful.
Thank you a lot.
Very honest, touching and raw, nicely expressed
Thank you dear. Love and hugs.
You are very welcome
touching, a great write
Thank you.
most welcome
It's hard to loose someone. Hopefully the wall doesn't talk back. Lol
Yes it is hard to loose someone.
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