Fine tune

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Hear I am

Time to fine tune

Is it the fourteenth day since the new moon?

It is shining bright tonight 

Tell of his glory 

The sacrificial right

What do we worship

Where to we feed

At the altar of submission

Or the place of pride and greed

To know him is to love him

That's all he needs to know

Enter into his rest

Trust

Enjoy the show...

 

 

 

  • Author: Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 13th, 2025 07:52
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: arqios
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  • Demar Desu

    I like the rhyming

    • 2781

      It's not the main show, but thanks.

    • sorenbarrett

      If we truly know someone we will love them for we all come from the same. A very nice poem for the season. Well done

    • Poetic Licence

      A nicely written poem of someone's belief and dedication to their faith, I thought it flowed really nicely

    • Tony36

      Great write

    • arqios

      And indeed quite a show it is to witness; much of it in the surrounds every single day! Time draweth nigh🙏🏻🕊️



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