Blossom falls

Caring dove

Blossom falls like soft snow 

falling from many tender twigs 

tho far away from winter 

falling sometimes 

resting 

staying without the helpless feeling of disappearing 

it stays in the sun 

allowed the warmth from the sky to rest on its soft petals 

relaxing by its home 

still in the same space 

maybe not on those tender twigs 

where it blossomed from 

but below 

beside its home 

so close 

and that’s where it is happy 

in the place it knows 

and in the place that cares 

  • Author: Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 14th, 2025 05:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Lot of noise in house today , someone doing drilling so I decided to sit in the garden ..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Poetic Licence

    That is a lively write, our blossom tree is doing that as we speak, enjoyed the read

    • Caring dove

      Thankyou very much .. it’s nice to see . The cats have been in the garden today , too and a blackbird ..

      • Poetic Licence

        The sun brings everything to life have a great week

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        Do not blame you for changing location. What a beautiful poem and metaphor that came out of that location. Well done, my friend! 🌹👏

        • Caring dove

          Yeah , it was very loud .. i guess sometimes we can feel kind of at home when we’re out in nature .. it made me feel better just to get outside and listen to the birds .. that noise was too loud

          Thanks for the comment

          • Tristan Robert Lange

            Indeed. Nature is always much better than the sound of drilling and hammering. Glad you could escape. You are most welcome, my friend.

          • sorenbarrett

            Proximity to home is an important part of tranquility. Very nicely written

            • Caring dove

              Thankyou.. I don’t always feel at home here .. sometimes I feel a bit lonely and miss people. Nature is comforting tho and so much nicer being outside than in the house listening to that loud noise

              Thanks for the kind comment

              • sorenbarrett

                I too seek nature to feel at home You are most welcome

                • Caring dove

                  It is comforting .. yeah .. nicer than being in the house on a nice day . It’s a nice garden too ..

                  Thanks

                • Goldfinch60

                  Beautiful words Yellow Rose and may your words always be true to us all.

                  Andy



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