Laugh Line

Ladywithaquill

When you laugh or smile there appears a crease,

Between your mouth and your left cheek.

Your face is so beautifully asymmetric at that moment,

I know for sure that you will have a deep laugh line there as you age.

I want to see it become more marked as the years pass by,

And I want to be the reason that it becomes,

The most striking feature on your face.

  • Author: Ladywithaquill (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 14th, 2025 13:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hopes and promises for the future.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 13
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  • sorenbarrett

    A beautiful wish to make a mark on someone else. Very nicely stated.

    • Ladywithaquill

      Thank you! Yes, mark them and be their life's witness.

    • Poetic Licence

      A lovely write in wishing to make there mark on someone and be with them for many years, nicely written

      • Ladywithaquill

        Thank you! A mark of shared joy, a bond strengthening with time.

        • Poetic Licence

          You are very welcome



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