juicy, deep and ripe love
which we
played,
discovered,
tasted,
licked,
and
polished,
now
itisbreathing
in
books...
A most interesting write that starts with the real and then distances to the literary. This gives the mind pause and causes the gears to grind. Well done
many thanks S for such valuable review...
A sense of turning our experiences into word,like this poem, enjoyed the read
🙂 thanks PL
You are very welcome
A memory etched in time
yes... thank you TS for taking time to read my poetry...
I found this to be a very different kind of love poem. I really liked it. Great work.
thank you RSM for coming by...
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A most interesting write that starts with the real and then distances to the literary. This gives the mind pause and causes the gears to grind. Well done
many thanks S for such valuable review...
A sense of turning our experiences into word,like this poem, enjoyed the read
🙂 thanks PL
You are very welcome
A memory etched in time
yes... thank you TS for taking time to read my poetry...
I found this to be a very different kind of love poem. I really liked it. Great work.
thank you RSM for coming by...
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