A lot has come to light since writing the last part,
I've met others who've also grown a new heart.
Mental breakdown to spiritual awakening,
How many more of us is God out there shaking?
There seems to be a lot of similar experiences,
Testimonies from individuals I've come to witness.
Didn't expect to find some form of faith in my 30s,
Truth tastes sweet like chocolate by Hershey's.
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This is a most intriguing poem that on the surface feels like a religious awakening but then one has to question how much of this is hidden meaning. It is the last line that gives this thought I have eaten many a Hershey's bar and they do appear sweet to a novice chocolate eater but if compared to real chocolate one will soon see the artificial taste of a Hershey's bar and its inferior quality that is bitter in comparison. The question becomes did the author place this purposely in the poem and if so it gives it a whole different meaning that is jaded and sardonic. Either way a great write
Thank you for reading and no I didn't do that on purpose but see how it can be interpreted that way for sure, thank you.
I live in the state of Hershey! LOL|! A wonderful poem, my friend. Indeed, it is quite thought-provoking. Well done. 🌹👏
Thanks pal, much appreciated.
You are most welcome!
Excellent write
Thanks pal.
You're welcome
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