If I were to make you,
What would you be?
And if you were to make me,
What would become of me?
Would you shape me as a dog?
Would you craft me as a cat?
Would you breathe me as a snake—
Or shape me human, just like that?
Would you see me as wicked?
Would you name me love?
Would you crown me with pride?
Or lift me up above?
If you were to make me,
What would I be?
Will I be a shadow of your vision?
Or the dream you long to see.
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Author:
Fumilayo bayo (Pseudonym) (
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Comments2
A most interesting thought of what others wish we were. How they would remake us if they could. A reason that many relationships do not work and breakdown. A lovely write
Exactly my point, most relationship end up breaking because their partner do not have what they want or give what they want.
Thanks for your feedback sorenbarrett.
Excellent write
Thank you Tony.
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