In a shattered night
A teenage heart beats bright
The mighty columns of love
Come tumbling down
Nowhere left to go
Footprints in the snow
Shadows of tenderness
Now walk away.
Her diamond eyes delight
He tries with all his might
But somehow hes forgotten
How to forget
Her kisses were divine
Lulling in his mind
The temple of her love
Now crashing down.
The night is free of friends
Witnessed through a lens
Of loneliness and heartbreak
It must show
Trying now to hide
Amongst the laughing crowd
Your beauty hard like granite
Without a heart.
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Author:
nephilim56 (
Offline) - Published: April 16th, 2025 01:59
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Comments4
Beautiful write, when it hurts it's so hard to forget, nicely expressed and written
very kind, many thanks
You are very
Welcome
Deeply metaphoric this poem talks of the price of selling ones trust misplaced. Well written in its careful presentation it sends its message to the listener. Nicely done
much appreciated thank you
Good write N.
many thanks, appreciated
Sounds like my baby mom.
thanking you
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