O

Mourgana of the Fey

 

I who have sent out ravens

 through murmur given names

diviners soothsayers dwellers

brought wise eyes

with only words

 

behold this basking beauty

coiled serpentine limbs

ravines open

 

ravens open flight

flocking aurochs wander

in verse of wide

 

I who Odin given

is spat out by name

through each civilization

a life worn path

bloodshot 

 

pierced by scorn of Ergi

a name given

curse I am not

 

so aim fire

point your finger at me

precisely pulling

a virtual trigger

o how abysmally pure

is this fate

written within

each margin

each human

 

behold

I wear this cloth

a christening gown

I am blackest blood

mine to keep

though never to own

 

o I am but

a dotted 

line

 

 

Copyrights Rian April 2025

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  • sorenbarrett

    I love this cryptic reference to the title and its implications the O in Odin, with reference to ravens, wise eyes (eye Odin had only one) eyes depicted as o's, coiled serpentine the ouroboros serpent swallowing its own tail in the shape of an o. A fave

    • Mourgana of the Fey

      Thank you Soren for the kind feedback, much much to say about this matter. Odin has many names, in order to find deepest wisdom we have to learn to see through his blind eye. Ty for the fave! Have a lovely day!

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      "o i am but / a dotted / line". Wow. 🤯 I have never heard it expressed this way, but this is the sort of existential line that just makes my mind explode and all of the thought juices flowing. A brilliant ending line to a brilliantly beautiful Odin-invoking poem. Brava! 🌹👏

      • Mourgana of the Fey

        Thank you muchly Tristan, this is an invocative verse indeed. I often use these figures as archetypes. I think I heard that wow being sent across.....!
        My pen loves to scribble these types of poems, I have some Celtic Inspired, Finnish inspired, Egyptian inspired as well....Anyways have a lovely day my friend!

      • Poetic Licence

        A wonderful write, I am not of understanding of all of it, which makes it more enjoyable to read as my slow thought process kicks into gear, a very enjoyable and interesting read

        • Mourgana of the Fey

          It is perfectly understandable that you do not get all of what I am trying to say. My wording can indeed be cryptic though it kind of is what it is. My writings do not explain though they do reveal their messages.. I am glad you took a dive into this, much appreciated. Have a fine day!

          • Poetic Licence

            You are very welcome and you too



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