experimental haiku

Thoughtless

stowaway cricket
the long ferry ride home

  • Author: JDB (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 16th, 2025 22:46
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • arqios

    That relates so much in so few words! Jiminy among themπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

    • Thoughtless

      Thanks.

      • arqios

        Most welcome πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • Poetic Licence

        Very clever write

        • Thoughtless

          You are kind as usual.

        • sorenbarrett

          Trying something new is a good thing. Nature does it all the time. It's called evolution. Some mutations catch on and others do not. A fun and great attempt.

        • Tony36

          Great write

          • Thoughtless

            Thanks.

            • Tony36

              You're welcome



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