I was reminiscing for a while today,
I thought about a daisy I once found.
I thought about how tender it was,
and how beautiful a flower it is today.
I thought about its beauty,
its intricate petals, each white as snow.
I thought I should gently caress them,
to feel the tender essence of its lovely form.
How delicately and marvelously fashioned
all the petals were made.
To see what I would find, I brought it close to me;
my, my, my—what beauty to behold.
I looked at the petals to see what they would say.
I knew the thought might seem awkward right away,
but the flower was a memory of an idyllic time.
I knew it would bring me memories of days gone by—
a sweet time I will treasure all my life,
about a flower so lovely and true.
I looked at the daisy once more,
with thoughts of my love and all we've shared.
Then I continued thinking...
Please don’t wither, please don’t fade,
stay with me for the rest of our days.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: April 17th, 2025 20:54
- Comment from author about the poem: My wife loves daisies, so I wrote this poem for her.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
How we should handle love with tenderness and care, enjoyed the read
A beautiful metaphor. Love so beautiful and yet delicate. Very nicely composed this poem reads so easily.
lovely sentiment, enjoyed
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