Cross the ultimate burden so our souls will not be forsaken.
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Author:
James Michael (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 17th, 2025 22:09
- Category: Spiritual
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Cross the ultimate burden so our souls will not be forsaken.
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Good write JM - saying not 50 words, when about 10 will do. I sometimes waffle and do the opposite. lol.
My inspiration can come briefly these days. I find Maxims reflect that. I have found your poetry admirable even if you waffle. Do ever use syrup for inspiration?
Thank JM. I have syrup - me wig on me head, that is! lol.
An extremely short poem with deep meaning and in the right season. Full of meaning it metaphorically holds much more that the amount of words would indicate what is true of any good poem. Very nice
Short it is yet written from my heart. Thanks for the visit!
Only a few words but nicely done,with meaning very appropriate for this time of year, enjoyed the read
Thank you kindly. Enjoy this season of spiritual reflection!
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