all the pictures on the walls of the house were erased
and the stupor had spread everywhere
i wanted to decorate the aquarium of colorful desires on the blank paper-like time
the night preserved in the silken package had become dazzling today
the hollow wind was fluttering and
the fog was about to disperse
among the furniture of the whole house,
i was surprised to see my favorite mirror
like foamy water soaks the heart
the stars soaked my eyes
when the sky was looking at itself in the mirror through the open window
the stars were sparkling like diamond grains
pearl strands were dangling in the starry world
the milky galaxy was flowing like a gentle breeze
the cool silver moon was giving me its coolness...
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Author:
dimpsmoon (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Nature
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Comments2
The stars soaked my eyes is a great line. The whole last stanza now turns on its head and represents to me the tears. A wonderful read
Thanks a lot S for such nice comment..
Beautiful imagery, friend. Love your describing of the stars: "the stars soaked my eyes" and "the stars were sparkling like diamond grains" for example. Breathtaking and powerful. A fave. 🌹👏
thanks very much T ...
You are very welcome!
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