Patience and Chimney
Patience heard the screen door slam.
The man had come outside to chop wood
To feed Chimney.
It was a cold spring, but the snow
Had retreated with her arrival.
Some nights, winter’s bully brother, Frost,
Returned only to be chased away by Spring.
She was not a lady to be trifled with.
Patience was snug and warm in her corner
Beside Chimney,
Enduring the presence of Frost.
The community had protected her
For as long as they could.
Mom’s leaves clung to Stem and covered her
Even after she was gone.
They slipped through the tangle of stems
To the ground below.
Patience thought
She was probably still feeding her.
Chimney kept Frost away from Patience,
Even when he snuck underground to kill Kitchen Root.
Chimney can be very protective of his space;
If riled, he will get as hot as Summer.
Chimney stays warm even when he sleeps.
Patience told Frost once, “Be kind.
Chimney did not like bullies much.”
Frost laughed and boasted, “Summer had gone,
And Winter was in charge.”
But now that Spring had arrived,
They were all packing up to leave.
Patience liked Spring
She was kind and liked flowers.
Patience heard the screen door slam
A lady and a child came out with gloves
And garden tools.
The lady told the child, “We need to
Clean out the flower beds by the chimney
And replant for Spring.”
“Oh! Look, Mom. One little flower
By the chimney is still in bloom.
It has survived the winter.
Can I try to root it?”
The lady said, “Sure, see that knuckle
Down the stem a bit? Cut on a slant
just below the knuckle, and put it into
A bud vase in the window.
She is a tough one.
She probably will root in a few days.”
Patience felt the snip.
Where was Chimney when she needed him?
The child put Patience in a bud vase
With food and water and placed her
In the window.
The window was warm,
But Patience missed the community,
Her mom, and Chimney,
Even if he was not much of a talker.
Stem had grown a Kitchen Root like the lady said,
Two small buds tightly wound
Were sprouting from Stem.
Patience thought, my goodness, I have children.
Patience was joyful but felt weak.
And fearful She would die.
Before they bloomed.
She may not be here to tell them
About the community, their grandmother,
And Chimney.
They may not remember me much.
As we just passed
As they were entering life
And I was leaving.
The child said, “Look, Mom, my little flower
Has roots and two buds.
I’m going to plant her back where I found her
by the Chimney.”
Suddenly a burst of flame from the fireplace.
The lady asked, “What was that?”
The man said, “Probably a pine-knot exploding.”
Patience said, “I love you too, Chimney.
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Author:
Jerry Reynolds (
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- Published: April 22nd, 2025 07:58
- Category: Sociopolitical
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Comments3
A most enjoyed tale in verse๐๐ป๐
Thanks for the read, Arquis.
Most welcome, Jerry๐๐ป๐
Well told this metaphor in form of fable speaks to those who have children and the passing of age. I love how you chose the name Patience for the plant. Patient it was. I have a play on the name issue for tomorrow. Enjoyed it
Thanks for the read and comment, SB
You held my attention for the length of your tale, Jerry. A great achievement all round, as you are not prone t write long 'uns very often and my attention doesn't extend normally to much more than eight lines.
Enjoyed thoroughly.
Thanks, Dave. High praise indeed. Me either for the most part. I am reading some Robert Frost. I have been influenced.
One of the good guys. kind of stuff I can really get into.
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