Now with every hour that we devour
the years they fade, and sweet turns sour
With every word that drives a knife right through ya....
and at the dawn of eternal night,
you pass me by to catch the light
and all I have left is hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah,
hallelujah, hallelujah
The sun won't rise 'til we've sung His love;
The rays beam down like a burning dove;
But all still love the heat that scorches through ya;
I've stayed in my wrong for far too long;
And now that I've accepted His love;
I'll stand in the sun, soul singing: Hallelujah,
Hallelujah, Hallelujah,
Hallelujah,Hallelujah.
- Authors: Rose of Sharon, MinaH
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- Published: April 22nd, 2025 11:45
- Limit: 10 stanzas
- Invited: Public (any user can participate)
- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Leonard Cohen\\\'s Hallelujah. Write about anything; try to work in the hallelujah chorus at the end. Bonus points if you can follow the AA B CC B rhyme scheme! :)
- Category: Unclassified
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