Open heart and open mind,
Understanding the winds of time.
Essence of a greater truth,
Seeks harvest of a golden fruit.
To sip its nectar, long and slow.
As life and time so swiftly goes.
Across the planets, moons and stars.
Reaching the consciousness of all.
I ponder where the line it falls.
Of paradise here we do bestow.
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This has biblical as well as more astronomical references and is very nicely written in few words. Life and creation seem to fall within this poem of paradise of an earthly nature.
Superb.
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