This empty feeling in my chest
why can’t I put it to rest
you tore me apart
I am forced to part
saw the longing in your eyes
the loving gaze
you chose to abandon it
the reason a maze
my cold heart you lit
inflamed it aches
melting in flames
you held me so dearly in your arms
and now you’re simply a fleeting memory of my mind
alas I try to forget to resign
you haunt my fleeting days,
my dawns, my dreams
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Author:
Genesis (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 23rd, 2025 09:39
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Some people are not good for you. To know this would be quite helpful. Good write
Sadly you can’t always tell what’s behind the facade, until far too late. I haven’t gotten much feedback on my poems, so I don’t know how good my writing truly is. If you’re just being polite, its very sweet of you still, i’m flattered.
I never say something I don't mean. We all learn and improve with practice as a new poet this write was good.
Sometimes you do not know it is poisonous until you get bitten, enjoyed the read
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