The Tide has gone out.

David Wakeling



We now live in houses that are make believe,
Made of black silk, spun by black caterpillars.
A tiger guards the door and we cannot leave,
Afraid that, our friends are all hapless killers.

The high tide is going out tonight,
Let it expose the malignant sand,
The place where sorrow is in sight,
And none of us can lend a hand.

We now eat cold meals alone in the dark,               
Our little world that was once golden is no more,
The once verdant forests will be bleak and stark,
And we are left wondering what it was all for.

  • Author: David Wakeling (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 25th, 2025 00:49
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  • arqios

    One that spoke my heart or did it sing in woeful lament πŸ•ŠπŸ™πŸ»Liked and Faved 🀩

    • David Wakeling

      Thank you so much mi amigo.Mucho appreciado

      • arqios

        Haha! It was well worth it πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

      • sorenbarrett

        This speaks to me of the dead and more specifically those fallen in war. It is a most sober poem that is somber as well. Most intriguing images and metaphors. Loved it

        • David Wakeling

          Thank you so much compadre. Your comments are always appreciated



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