O luminous light of purification
the raven within mine heart
lay afloat upon sunset
nine ripples open
into Venusian vines
garlands given
I am the siren
beholding no one
only mys soul
alone these lavender hems
fade into dark blue knowing
wither now into cosmic cologne
this nocturnal flight
begins
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Mourgana of the Fey (
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So many symbols in this poem the raven of wisdom straight from Odin's shoulder. Nine number of completion, reinforced by a sunset close of day, Venusian vines growth of love reinforced with siren seduction and the colors of tranquility turned to loyalty. Well done
Thank you for sharing your reflections and insights on this piece Soren, usually my poems are filled with symbolism indeed! Have a lovely day!
Seriously beautiful, Rian. You have a way of weaving together scene and setting so seamlessly that they become living metaphors for your entire point. Well done. I am a fan. 🌹👏🐦⬛
Thank you much Tristan, and if you say the metaphor has come to life, well thats also part of how I write. To fully awaken these visions. This is part of a song lyric I once wrote I have changed it, am working on different versions of it. Enjoy your day my friend!
Wow! How awesome! You’re very welcome Mourgana! You too!
I have a great love for my own raven and that of Poe
O luminous light of purification
the raven within mine heart
lay afloat upon sunset
Wonderfully crafted poetry. 🌹
Thank you kindly Teddy for all the words and reflections, glad that you enjoyed this poem. Yes i like the both too, the Raven and ravens in each and every way. Enjoy your day Terry!
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