I hear the rhythms of the night,
tremors deep beneath the ground,
energy pulses strong and swift,
a force unseen, yet all around.
A breakout from monotony—
echoes of musical undertones ignite.
I hear the tremors underground, a symphony,
shattering the silence of the night.
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Author:
rrodriguez (
Offline) - Published: April 28th, 2025 17:43
- Comment from author about the poem: I was playing with words and came up with this poem.
- Category: Nature
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The night definitely has its rhythms and its symphony it is my favorite music. Listening to the crickets, frogs, cicadas, owls. A lovely write.
We just had a rainy day. I hear the coquis calling all around and the crickets, too. It's not a quiet night, but I enjoy the organic symphony outside. Thank you for reading the poem.
A parallel and opposite wonderful experience in contrast to De Barge’s “Rhythm of the Night” and Gloria Estefan’s (Miami Sound Machine) “Rhythm is Gonna Get You.”
Funny, I did listen to De Barge’s “Rhythm of the Night”, but I couldn't relate to it. Gloria Estefan’s (Miami Sound Machine) “Rhythm Is Gonna Get You” makes sense, since the rhythm of the night did get me, especially when actual tremors are coming from the sea (earthquake tremors). Thanks for reading my poem.
Most pleasurable indeed🙏🏻🕊
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