one bed
on a same time
two people
without clothes
their moans
their pleasure
yet the woman
is called a prostitute
So what should be the name of the man???
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Author:
dimpsmoon (Pseudonym) (
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- Published: May 1st, 2025 04:12
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 18
- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
Comments4
A poem of moral and social labels I would call the man the unwanted bastard that has to pay for his favors. Good write
is he do favor?? 🤔
Excellent write
many thanks tony 🙂
You're welcome
WOW! It's so deep. Meaningful in this generation.
hey Skally
thank you for coming by... I'm glad you loved my stuff...
Society sucks, doesn't it? Judgment an awful reality that, in this case, definitely effects women almost exclusively. Great poem with a poignant, probing rhetorical question at the end. Well done, my friend. 🌹👏
absolutely... society is harsh... hollow and hypocritical... well thanks robert for encouraging me with your words..
You are most welcome, my friend!
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