Green lives inside sometimes
on items in a house
when green also lives lightly outside in the soft strong sun
on the light leaves
by the friendly flowers
nicer to be outside
away from those four walls
when feeling trapped
away from those walls
that remind you
how trapped you might feel sometimes
in self and in life
to go where you please
you might not be able to
but you can step into the garden atleast
Find maybe a little more freedom beside the birds
singing their own tune without limits
being themselves
because they can be
and their where they wish
let the words flow feeling that little bit more free
when feeling trapped in self snd in life
in walls of your mind or in life
you escape onto paper
speaking words you wish
just like those birds that sing their own tune
finding that little bit of freedom
just by using your voice
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Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes you find you feel trapped in yourself , with your feelings or even in life ..
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Great metaphor. We are all ultimately trapped within ourselves but we can look out the window we can open our doors and let in the light and receive visits from nature and friends. A most lovely metaphor
Thank you 🙂
I think some of the trapped feelings comes from my dissociation but yeah also that lack of confidence in life . Today I wished I could have had my sisters company but I can’t ,.. it’s like that feeling of we can’t do something or we can’t always feel as we wish . But yeah .. nature is comforting and helps a bit when I’m upset / or struggling with how I feel
Think we need to escape how we feel sometimes .. because it can be difficult at times
Some people have confidence to do whatever they want .. ( their lucky )
Thanks so much for the lovely comment
Most welcome
Great write
Thankyou
Wasn’t really sure about this writing
And didn’t even think it was that good
But thanks
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Excellent metaphor. Indeed, there is no where else to be but stuck inside ourselves, then to throw disassociation into it. Well written, my friend. I could feel this. 🌹👏
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