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I don’t hear the cock
I see a crow eating seeds
I threw out for them
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Demar Desu (
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- Category: Haiku
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Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface
your poems are very short. 🙂 the birds are awake here too and noisy.
And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster's meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn't attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏
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