all the birds are awake

Demar Desu

I don’t hear the cock 

I see a crow eating seeds 

I threw out for them 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Another wonderful Haiku that holds more meaning than is instantly available to the reader. Deeper than it appears on the surface

  • lewisgale mental hospital

    your poems are very short. 🙂 the birds are awake here too and noisy.

  • Tristan Robert Lange

    And that crow thanks you with a resounding caw, before it flies off to steel another rooster's meal! 🤣 At least seeds shouldn't attract a murder of crows! Well done, bro. Crow jokes aside, this haiku, paired with its title, is a powerful metaphor. A fave! 🌹👏



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