The sun shines on this place
Daily I still see your face
Etched somehere in my mind
Eyes that peirce still
Through a veil of emptiness I feel
What is this pain that stabs
Deep a pit within my very soul
A fire you ingited that burns with fury
So in the cold I am warmed
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Author:
James Warren (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 4th, 2025 23:21
- Category: Love
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Comments2
A very nice metaphor and clever use of a mixture of literal and emotional meanings to create meaning in the last stanza. Loved the ending of this poem.
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