I wish

MinaH

I wish to die;

Not because I'm depressed;

 

I wish to die;

For the peace God brings;

For the love only He can give.

 

I wish to die;

For this life is dreary;

For I still am only surviving.

 

I wish to die;

For death doesn't scare me;

In fact it seems so inviting.

 

I wish to die;

For I love you too much;

And I'd be so much happier.

  • Author: MinaH (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2025 13:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Death would be fun(:
  • Category: Reflection
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  • sorenbarrett

    A most interesting write. Death doesn't bother me pain does. A read that assumes from the last stanza that one loved is dead. Good write

    • MinaH

      Thank you (:

    • Tony36

      Excellent write

      • MinaH

        Thank you(:

        • Tony36

          You're welcome

        • Jal

          I like to think that death isn't the final goodbye, but rather a new beginning. Though, admittedly I still question just exactly what happens after we die. Whether there is some form of afterlife, or a long, tired return to the abyss, the uncertainty of it all does bring some anxiety and existential dread to the mix.
          I guess it wouldnt really matter anyways in the end haha. Either way, one will find themselves with some much needed rest when their time comes. Excellent poem, mate. 🤘

          • MinaH

            Thank you. I love these thoughts

          • nephilim56

            a very powerful peace

            • MinaH

              Thank you.

              • nephilim56

                welcome



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