Here there are no beginnings
no endings
bending
before risen sun sinks
trees shake their mossy beards
vibrant virality clings
to rasping rooks
their songs
sing feathered
let there be fog
for fog protects
silvery dressed
maidens afloat
I have become
the epithet called earth
standing among frozen streams
staring into rustic figments
otter opus
empress ermine
furry fox frock
a scythe cut portal opens
into virtue of belonging
here I am open handed
I am ready to walk my path
a solitary treasure
leaning towards
letting go
breathing in
deepest
listening
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Author:
Mourgana of the Fey (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Inspired by Finnish myth
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- Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments5
I can hear and see the nature in this poem. It talks to me and seductively draws me in. Into a world of myth and fantasy of a past reality. Lovely
Thank you fr your words Soren, much appreciated!
This is quite charming.I have the sense of optimism towards the end. A lovely cadence and an enjoyable read.
Thank you David, glad you enjoyed this and sensed the optimism at the end!
BRAVO
Glad you enjoyed this poem Tony
You're welcome
Beautiful and enigmatic like the Baltic Finnic peoples themselves. Wonderful poem of myth and mist. A fave for sure! 🌹👏
Thank you Tristan, the Finno Ugric myths are a branch of their own, some of the stories very complexed and detailed. Their culture often a culture based on Shamanic principles. This part of mythology has a special place in my heart. We all have these special personal places of power that we visite sometimes be it through writing, stories, dreams or poetry, have a lovely day!
You are most welcome, my friend. Indeed, we all do. Thank you for sharing! I am a fan of your work! I hope your day is lovely as well!
I really enjoyed the read and the optimistic ending, nicely written
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