Tomorrow is my birthday

Demar Desu


Notice of absence from Demar Desu
I am working on a new book… please buy my first book.

at 27 

can’t believe I am alive 

am I doing right?

  • Author: Demar Desu (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 6th, 2025 05:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: It’ll help, My book poems of changes is out. The link is below, 1 purchase is 5 dollars towards me. Thank you Poems of Changes https://www.amazon.com/Poems-Changes-Demar-Desu/dp/B0DJHXG593?dplnkId=17b7c578-186f-4e34-b120-cc3bbf1a289a&nodl=1
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 17
  • Users favorite of this poem: Tristan Robert Lange
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  • sorenbarrett

    This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.

    • Demar Desu

      I hope I’m not colorblind

    • Tristan Robert Lange

      Can't answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here's to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏



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