at 27
can’t believe I am alive
am I doing right?
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Author:
Demar Desu (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It’ll help, My book poems of changes is out. The link is below, 1 purchase is 5 dollars towards me. Thank you Poems of Changes https://www.amazon.com/Poems-Changes-Demar-Desu/dp/B0DJHXG593?dplnkId=17b7c578-186f-4e34-b120-cc3bbf1a289a&nodl=1
- Category: Haiku
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Comments2
This Senryu took me by surprise well made and yes as long as you are on the green side of the grass you are doing just fine.
I hope I’m not colorblind
Can't answer the last question for myself, let alone anyone else, but here's to hoping and trying...That said, your poems are doing right! Happy Birthday, my friend! 🎂🎉🌹👏
Cheers to the hoping and trying, thank you bro
You are welcome!
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