Trapped
stuck in one place
wants to fly with confidence
have wings
be like a butterfly
but feels stuck in life
lacking the confidence to go to places she wishes
stuck
sighing
wishing for confidence
but struggling in the mind
so lacks
what some others
may take for granted
just wanting to feel normal
just wanting to feel confident
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Author:
Yellow rose (Pseudonym) (
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The mind is the cocoon from which butterflies of confidence metamorphosize and emerge with wings to fly. A lovely write
Thanks for the supportive comment ) I’ve been struggling with how I feel , a little bit today .. and yes feeling trapped
hope you open your wings and fly, no longer trapped, nice write
Sorry you are feeling this way, Caring Dove. A haunting poem, hope seen but not able to be grasped. It reminds me of the King who built the Taj Mahal. Before it could be finished, he was arrested by his son and put under house arrest. He was put in a room he could not leave, and the window view he had was of the Taj Mahal. Within view, but unreachable...only able to see from a distance the tomb of his love. Not sure why this reminded me of that. I guess because there is a tragic nature to being trapped, able to see what you long for, but never being able to obtain/attain it. A powerful write, friend. Keeping you in my prayers. 🌹👏❤️🩹
It is sad to either be trapped / or feel trapped
Thankyou so much for your supportive kind words
It’s a difficult to feeling to have
I think sometimes our own feelings can make us feel trapped in ourselves or In life
Thankyou
Your words will lead you to a wonderful place Yellow Rose, it is there waiting for you.
Andy
Thanks for your kind words
A very relatable write which is nicely expressed, hope your butterfly appears soon and freedom is found, take care
Thankyou so much ))
You are very welcome
Good read. At times we all feel stuck but helping others will help to get us unstuck.
We do . Thankyou ))
it [confidence in self] will come one day - and it has to be grasped, and not allowed to be released
enjoyed the beautiful poem
Thanks for the kind comment
most welcome..have a good weekend
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