God is mad as Hell and he ain't gonna take it
We've screwed up the world so badly that we can't even fake it
We've vowed to be good and then quickly we break it
Can we start all over and learn to re-make it?
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Yes we broke it and now what? Good read
We fix it. Thanx for the comment.
I imagine Him as broken-hearted...underneath all the anger is hurt and sadness. Good write!
Thank you for the perceptive comment. I believe that undeath all anger is hurt and sadness and a call for love.
Of course!
A very poignant write, the question is can it be fixed and will we be allowed to do that, enjoyed the read
I don't know if wed can fix it but I know that we must. Thanx for the comment.
You are very welcome
Great write. Good point. Thank God for being forgiving. We will get another chance... and another... and...
Thanx for the comment RSM. And you are right on point too.
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