The moonlit pond is hard to miss,
It is a comforting corner of bliss,
Amidst the deep, dark jungle,
Is the moonlit puddle.
It has lotuses growing underwater,
Blessed by Artemis, Zeus's daughter.
On the lotus leaves ,
Sits a tiny frog,
"This is heaven" , the frog believes,
As the evening comes, he sees the spreading of the fog.
The fireflies add on to the beauty,
Their Little lights are what they wear as jewellery.
The moonlit pond is hard to miss,
It is a comforting corner of bliss.
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Author:
Moonstruck_1310 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: As someone who's obsessed with Percy Jackson, I quite enjoyed writing the line about Artemis 🙃🧢🖊️
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Comments4
That was a very clever rhyme Artemis and a great reference. The whole poem leaves an enchanted feeling of peace. Very nice
Thank you!! Great to know you got the reference 😄💖💖
A lovely write that gives you a calm feeling and that all is well, enjoyed the read
Thank you so much 💖💖
You are very welcome
Very picturesque. I like how you repeated the second and last line. It's wraps the image up very well.
Thank you 💖💖 repeating lines in my poems is kind of my thing 🙃
Lovely poem!
Thanks a lot 💖
I love moon poems. I've written some, too.
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