I steal the greedy gaze of envious men,
to shape a shelter—bright, unbroken—
to carve into this earth a dream unblinking,
and through the wreckage, build a land of fire and dawn.
I slit the swollen guts of liars and thieves,
the fat kings choking on their gold,
to dress the wounds of the world in calm,
to seed the soil with truth where their rot once grew.
Now I stand—a blade, a vow, a storm,
my poem a nation’s spine, its cry, its rising.
I am no distant solitude.
I am the hand that burns.
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Author:
Mottakeenur Rehman (
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- Published: May 8th, 2025 00:13
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Comments3
An interesting and thought provoking write, nicely written
Thanks a lot ....
You are very welcome
This poem to my mind highly symbolic and historic of a nation once set on the principles of freedom where the hand that burns represents to me the torch in the hand of lady liberty. A powerful and most moving poem that speaks of past principles and a nation. Yet this could be taken further at another level and interpreted to mean the hand of liberty is actually burning and in its destruction for all it once stood for is destructing and falling to ash. A wonderful poem and a fave
I pleased to see your praisworthy and rational remark .
great write
Thank you🙏
most welcome, enjoyed
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