We're the same
but made of different fog
We touch each other with borrowed gestures
as if love were
a bottomless chest
left on the sidewalk
full of keys
without doors
We guard each other with forgetfulness
and we keep each other
like coins
that are of no use in this world.
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Author:
Damaso (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The Doga and the Wolf.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Great lines in this poem that like an arrow to the heart meet their mark. The whole last stanza was marvelous. A definite Fave
Thank you so much for your words of encouragement. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes in the morning I can make out the words are coming from somewhere. Best regards.
A direct hit to the heart, loved the last verse, nicely done
Thank you so much,Mister, for your kind words. I\'m glad they touched your emotions. My heart tied to my tongue betrays me between the words. Best regards.
You are very welcome
Love this Damaso, my friend! This one hits direct and closes with power. Well done! 🌹👏
Well, my friend, I'm so glad you find it that way. Your comments are very encouraging. Thanks for stopping by. Best regards.
You are most welcome, my friend!
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