How will you desire a star,
Standing upon a mountain?
You already know it's really far—
Perhaps it's best not to attain.
But the eyes still gaze,
For that hopeless, distant flame.
It's fit more for a craze
Than a dream without a name.
- Salvia.S
© Salvia.S
-
Author:
Salvia.S (
Offline) - Published: May 11th, 2025 05:31
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 18
- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Tristan Robert Lange, cellinic, Poetic Licence
Offline)
Comments5
A dream without a name is like a land without borders. Good one 🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you so much!!!
You’re most welcome and thank you so much for your support of my writing as well🙏🏻🕊️
The metaphor in this poem is so deep. It reflects wishes beyond our reach yet calls to us in dreams that we know can't be fulfilled but are still yearned for and in that craze we live our lives. A definite fave
Thank you so much for the read, interpretation and the fave!!! Much appreciated!!!
Salvia, dearest poet and friend, have I told you how brilliant you are? I am not 😗💨. I am serious. This poem is another example of your poetic prowess and your ability to speak deeply through profound metaphor. Brava, sister. 🌹👏
Thank you very much for the kind words of encouragement!!! It really made my day 🌹🌹
You are welcome and I am glad. 🙂
Very impressive, deep with reserved emotional overtones. Like and fave, dear
Thank you so much dear ❤️
A wonderful write, we continue to dreams that we know are not attainable, but we still desire and crave them, enjoyed the read
That's true. Thank you so much for the read and feedback!!!
You are very welcome
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.