It hurts

cofhypieces

I may lose my mind

lose my heart 

and lose my soul

 

I may lose my sight

lose my sense 

and forget my goals

 

I may,

forget all

forgive all

but never play blind any more

or do it into thy power

and lose it all

 

I may forget properties or assets

artefacts or objects

I may even trade my prospects

 

But may I never forget mine enemy

His venom in my heart

His hurts down in my spine

 

for shadows and images

I should differ

fables and comedies

I should know better

 

some are polished

others are genuine

some are make ups

just trying to renew

 

it hurts!

when its nothing but pretence

and only something when it hurts

 

But my fore brain

my fore brain keeps it

my hind brain holds it

and my will

says always on always

  • Author: cofhypieces (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 13th, 2025 01:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: Rejection, love, betrayal
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Poetic Licence

    Nicely written piece expressing the hurt and pain of rejection and betrayal, nicely written

  • sorenbarrett

    A poem of past pain and offense leading to anger and defiance that stands strong. It is powerful and shows a sense of resolve. Nicely written



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