The sun dances across the stagnant sky
In a fair waltz with the moon and stars
I see it in your eyes in the moment
Sometimes I will see sadness in your sky
The type of sadness that everyone feels
But can never be akin to others
The type of sadness that i've always held
but can never think to ever speak of
But in this graceful waltz here and now
though I see that vulnerability
You seem to accept it unlike I do
I see you in my nights infinite sky
Every last star and moon in every life
That last dance in my this twilight
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Author:
Brynlee (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I really enjoy doing things out of my comfort zone with poetry and this sonnet definitely did that for me. I didn't have many ideas for the outcome of this poem but I knew I wanted to confuse people and really make people reflect on what this poem means to them. Whilst I can tell you the meaning, I want you come up with one that makes sense to you and how this poem resonates with you.
- Category: Reflection
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Just riding the feeling created by this poem there was a sense of peacefulness left. It felt very nice
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