When I fell from the sky
You were my melted wax wings
Recklessness led me to you
So much hope only to feel my heart ache as I fell
I had fallen like this before
I had fallen for you
The same longing, the same desire
But I never expected to be falling like this
Falling like the ground won't hit me any second
Falling like I hadn't already fallen for you
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Author:
Brynlee (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The feeling of longing is something a lot of us know really well. I decided to pick this one out of my portfolio because of its flow and cohesive. I hope I did this feeling justice with this poem.
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Comments2
Very nice there is certainly the feeling of being infatuated and the lack of caution that goes with it. A lovely write
A very nice write, well expressed
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