Whatever be the state of your wealth :
These are what will affect your health -
To me they are the ‘Golden three’
That can either bind, or set us free
The first is definitely all our fears
That make us put a brake on the gears;
The second are the tears we shed
That keep flowing till the eyes have bled..
The third – and most important one
Are the years that fly past -one by one
So – this is the Golden trio I feel
That we should face, if we want to heal.
Offline)
Comments8
Enjoyed the read, with some positive advice, nicely done
thanks - this is life as I see it
glad you enjoyed
You are very welcome
A great poem.Tears Fears and Time passing.This poem made me think.Excellent
it made me sit back and think too - hence shared
thanks for the feedback
Very nicely rhymed this formula for healing. Clever wording and good advice. Well done I say.
always glad to receive your positive feedback
thank you so much - have a great day
Oh, now there is a recipe to live on with: fears, tears, and years... so good to read you again here, safina. Such a beautiful way to start the weekend.🙏🏻🕊️
yes, this trio shapes our lives i feel - hence shared
thank you so much - and here's wishing you a great weekend too
Yes - please ignore them all! Dismiss them and just live.....
so good to hear from you after a long time.
thanks for stopping by, and the fantastic advice - will ignore the tears and the fears - have started it already..
but what about the fleeing years ?
this is where i follow your advice - and will just live it up, while i am alive
Couldn't ask more of you than that; but also take very good care of yourself.
thanks, will do that.
you have a great weekend, and take care too..
Wise, positive advice, my friend. Well done! 🌹👏
thanks - it's a note to myself to abandon the fears and tears, and live life for the time I still have with me
Amen! Hits home with me too. Should with everyone.
i hope so because nothing teaches us better than this trio
True story!
Superb
thank you so much
Wealth, health and time, three things that all of us don't have, and there is also the great reflection of those who do and choose not to use them. a stunning piece of poetry dearest NafisaSB 🌹
thank you so much for understanding the underlying message..
let us use it wisely as time is fleeting
have a beautiful day
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.