The Vowel Challenge
The vowel challenge........
Just to see what you guys can make of this little test. The vowel challenge. I want you to write a short poem with a vowel in each line...ie: Only the vowel A in the 1st line E in the second line I in the third O in the fourth and U in the fifth. No other vowel in each line apart from the designated AEIOU in that order ..............
good luck
This is my attempt
Far away man starts a war,
Relentless when he meets,
Vivid fighting in his sights,
Morn's glow, Storms blow,
Guns cry, burnt July
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Author:
The Scarletbard (
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- Published: May 16th, 2025 02:22
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a bit of a brain teaser
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Comments3
In free verse not so hard but with rhyme that will require some time. A great challenge and should be a contest.
I saw this a few years ago and took me a couple of days to come up with my response
Firstly an enjoyable read, secondly that is some challange, I echo sorens view, in rhyme that could take time, nicely done
Cheers
Something to tax the old grey matter
You are very welcome and it will be
Your challenge reshapes language, balancing structure and expression. It sharpens wordplay while preserving meaning, crafting a rhythmic dance between phonetics and poetry.🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you for such feedback and lovely words of encouragement.
No worries, mate. Your energy is quite catching! 🕊️🙏🏻
Well I work as an Executive Head Chef consultant in London, so just a little time on here each day relaxes the tension
Interesting, well poetry is an excellent go to for that! 🙏🏻🕊️
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