The rain is falling from the sky,
Washing worries from the mind.
Dreams can soar even more high,
Soothing souls with peace of kind.
- Salvia.S
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A lovely quatrain Salvia the meaning comes through clearly.
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And higher still they soar lifting our peace to touch other planes of conscious being! 🙏🏻🕊️
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Most welcome Salvia🙏🏻🕊️
And may that peace find the right souls, lovely read
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Very nice, sincere and deep, good rhythm!
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It is strange. We feel that our heart and mind are different from us. Indeed, our heart questions us. Even more, it DRIVES us... It rules us. It overrules the mind. It can and does lead us to our destruction, sometimes... The greatest and most impressive achievements were made from the heart, not the mind. Refer to the poem "If tomorrow starts without me" by David Romano. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xx9zE1g9Io4&pp=ygUqaWYgdG9tb3Jyb3cgc3RhcnRzIHdpdGhvdXQgbWUgZGF2aWQgcm9tYW5v
Soman Ragavan
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That's so true! The heart can lead us to incredible achievements, but also to challenges...
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Rain cleanses my soul in a way I didn't know possible. It's such a beautiful thing thank you for writing about it.
Glad it resonated!!! Thanks for the read and comment!!!
Of course!
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