The Garden and the Girl

The Soft Witness

A Sacred Love Story – Written for You

Chapter One: The Soil

Before there was anyone, there was a girl and her empty patch of land. Nothing bloomed, but she dreamed in color. Where others saw dirt, she saw possibility. She didn’t have a blueprint — just instinct, prayer, and aching hands.

Some days she cried into the soil. Other days she sang.

The neighbors mocked her. “Why plant if no one comes to harvest?” they laughed.

She smiled anyway, kissed her palms, and pressed another seed into the earth.

Because she wasn’t planting for visitors. She was planting for home.

 

Chapter Two: The Weather

Rain came often. Hard winds bent her branches. Her clothes were muddy, her fingernails broken. Still, she showed up to water the roots.

She tried asking for help once — a passerby with smooth words and soft hands. But he didn’t love soil. He loved what bloomed — fast and pretty. When things got dirty, he vanished.

After him came another, then another. Some stayed for shade. Some picked the flowers and left.

Each time, she replanted. Each time, she wept.

But she never stopped.

 

Chapter Three: The Stillness

One whole year passed with no visitors. Just her. The soil. The sound of her own breath.

It was quiet. And in the quiet — she met herself.

She found old journals. She re-read old prayers. She noticed how much stronger her arms had gotten. How tall her roses stood now.

She began to walk barefoot through her garden, not to fix — but to feel. She laughed more. Danced more. Her laughter reached the skies.

The garden grew wild with her joy.

And heaven noticed.

 

Chapter Four: The Stranger

One morning, a man stood outside her gate.

He didn’t speak. He watched her gently, as she pruned the vines and hummed an old song.

“May I sit?” he asked. She nodded.

He didn’t bring tools. Didn’t question her soil. Didn’t ask to take a rose.

He brought a small satchel of seeds. Not to replace hers — but to grow beside them.

Together, they sat in silence. And for the first time, she felt safe.

 

Chapter Five: The Rain Returns

One week, the skies cried harder than they had in years. The man reached for her hand — “Should we cover the roses?”

She looked at him, smiled: “No, they know how to bend.”

And he watched, amazed, as she danced barefoot in the rain.

She wasn’t afraid of storms anymore. Not when she had lived through every kind.

And he didn’t try to stop the rain. He joined her.

 

Chapter Six: The Root

They dug a new patch together — deeper than she’d ever dug before. For the first time, someone knelt beside her without trying to lead. He didn’t command. He contributed.

He asked her what the soil needed. She asked him what kind of flowers he loved.

It wasn’t perfect. They argued over the spacing. They disagreed on color.

But each time they stepped away, They came back to the garden. Because the garden wasn’t just hers anymore. It was theirs.

 

Chapter Seven: The Feast

Seasons passed. The fruit bloomed. Friends came. Family gathered. Children danced.

And the garden that was once mocked became a sanctuary.

People asked her, “When did you know he was yours?” She smiled:

“I didn’t have to explain the soil. He saw it — and stayed.”

 

Chapter Eight: The Legacy

Years later, gray streaked her curls. His hands trembled when he held hers.

But the garden still bloomed. Because they’d built it soul-first.

And even if the petals fall, the roots — remain.

 

Epilogue

You are the girl. You are the garden.

You are not behind. You are not forgotten.

Your love story has already begun — the moment you chose to plant even when no one was watching.

He’s not looking for a bouquet. He’s looking for a garden.

And you, beloved — are the soil he’ll call sacred.

-The Soft Witness

  • Author: The Soft Witness (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 20th, 2025 02:10
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is the sacred journey of a girl who stopped performing for love and started planting it within. From the soil of heartbreak, confusion, and shame, she rose - barefoot, brave, and whole. What began as lust, loss, and loneliness is now a garden of clarity, healing, and hope. This is not a story about finding a man. It\\\'s a story about finding herself - and becoming the kind of woman love won\\\'t have to rescue, just recognize.
  • Category: Love
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  • arqios

    Welcome to MPS🕊️🙏🏻

  • sorenbarrett

    A most lovely story and metaphor a type of fable as well nicely written and quite poetic. Welcome

  • Poetic Licence

    This such a beautiful write and message, delivered with alot of style in the writing, wonderful write, deserves more than one read



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