the lines I write
of words I cannot say
should not say
dare not say
its my protest
though seemingly silent
its my scream
though inaudible
my words
fall
through
the
cracks
of
the
sidewalk
and
collect
in
droplets
and
puddles
to
be
weld
into
swords.
the lines I write
of words I cannot say
should not say
dare not say
its my protest
though seemingly silent
its my scream
though inaudible
my words
fall
through
the
cracks
of
the
sidewalk
and
collect
in
droplets
and
puddles
to
be
weld
into
swords.
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Comments5
Very relatable write, I too write what I find hard to say in person, love the lay out
Thank you for reading and complimenting my poem!
You are very welcome
There is a feeling of defiance in this poem and screams out of each falling line. Well done
A little rebellion is healthy, I'd say
This is a strong and moving poem. It shows how even quiet words can have power. Well done!!!
Thank you so much, I really appreciate the time you took to read this.
You are an amazing writer. It's a gift. This is one of my all time favs of your works
It really struck me with its message and even imagery of your word placement. I loved it.
Wow. More power to your pen. Spill it out.
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