Again
Sleep Evades
In its place
Thoughts meander
Colliding and coalescing
Chimera taking shape
Likes clouds forming
And dissipating
Transmuting again
Before closed eyes
I am daydreaming
At midnight
Again
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A lovely write of something we think alot of people have done, nicely written, enjoyed the read
I am replying to both you and @sorenbarrett as independent comments, but my comments can be read as a whole. Thank you for the encouragement, I have struggled with the concept of "new creation" and knowing that "my take" on a common concept is valid is a bigger deal than you may realize. Thank you again.
You are very welcome
I liked this one that turns cliches into poetic images fresh and new. Well done
Thank you. I struggle with expressing myself, through Nature and Nurture, I have been taught that I have nothing to add to the conversation. I struggle greatly with acts of self expression and comments like this help. Thank you and @poetic Licence. I am aware I am not the first to have these thoughts, but I sincerely hope my take is at least a new one for some. Comments like this encourage me to post more, Thank you both. Post Script: The Anonymity helps!
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