A glass vial
shattering fragile
pierced and shattered
stabbed and battered
in flood drowned
water has no sound
heavy like a brick
blood flows thick
no guaranteed safety
but feigned dainty.
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Author:
Mya H. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 21st, 2025 09:24
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Comments3
This beautifully captures the tension between fragility and strength. The language is direct but evocative, making the poem feel impactful and thought provoking. Well done!
thank you so much this means a lot.
The loss of a vial of blood well portrayed. Very nice
thank you !
An interesting write of the loss of needed blood, sense of will i live or will I die, nicely expressed
deeply appreciated!!
You are very welcome
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